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Abstract, Black and White, Childhood, Dark, Entropy, Neglect, Photography, Poetry, Rain
Creeping grey shadows-
The young evening rain-
Spindling down ridges
Of a blue landscape
Jagged spine rising
With thin crimson veins
Bound about this face
So stumbling inert
Quashed and well-erased
Thoughts, like sooty stains,
Squelched, livid between
These muddy fingers
Groping through the gap-
Opiod Blizzard
Droll and frenzied cries
Waft up from below
As the metal groans
Deft feet kicking
Minims ricocheted
Her soft infant face
Punched with eyes of stone
Hands red and rusting
In this place, her home,
Wet, bent and ugly
A one-swing grace-land
In a pebble sea
Pendulous laughter
Like sugar in rain
Dissolving slowly
Muculent trenches
The buckling of time
Her maimed childhood
A mute, mewling cry
In the yard below
Her timid summons
A wind- brushed, hollow
Drowned at the window
Never leaking through-
Paternal instinct
Escaping through gleet
Glinting on grey toes
Razored knees, limp eyes
Fixed on the canvas
Of barren ceiling
So stoic, above-
Restive memory
Cryogenic now
Such impotent Love
And nothing beyond-
Sagging plastered sky
And a muffled sound
Perhaps a housefly
At the window
Has come ’round
Very dark. I like it a lot.
Aye, a wee bit. I am delighted it was liked! Thank you! Cheers to you,
Autumn Jade
Reflections of rain! Love!
Thank you lassie! I love the rain, aye aye, that I do! Cheers!
Autumn Jade
interesting. many good images and perfect poetic wording…especially like “Her pendulous laughter/ Dissolving slowly / Like sugar / in Rain.”
Thank you for the comment. I rather enjoyed those lines too. The peculiar and primitive places the mind reverts to sometimes on a long, arduous grey day. 😉
Stunning, stunning site! Thank you!
Thank you so much!
Can I ask a favor? I need some help transforming some recent portraits of my father into black and white and I cannot get them to where I like them. Could you email me at ack @ inforesolution.com (I put spaces in the address to confound the spammers) if you would have a chance to consult? Thanks! I just love your silky photo texture…
Apologies on getting back to you so late on this- I really use very simple means of editing, but would love to offer any help I can! You will have an e-mail from me shortly. Cheers,
Autumn Jade
wonderful weaving of words!!
Thank you! More of a bizarre work in comparison to what I usually write. Glad it was enjoyed! Cheers!
Autumn Jade
Great work! Thanks for bringing me to your photography work! I do enjoy reading your blog!
Thank you very much! Greatly appreciated, myriad cheers!
Autumn Jade
I can’t decide which I like more – the photography or the poetry. Perhaps I like both in equal measure. 🙂
Thanks for the visit and the follow.
Thank you for this delightful comment, and for drizzling by and having a wee glisk around. Ebullient cheers!
Autumn Jade
so original, unique.beautiful, lilting…..
Thanks so much! I am still wavering on how I like the words, har har. They still feel so ill-constructed and discombobulated. Will probably return to them once again, har har. Anyhow, thank you for visiting and leaving such a splendid comment! Cheers!
Autumn Jade