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Black and White, Experimental, Florida, Grain, Grief, Melancholy, Nature, Ocean, Photography, Poetry, Sadness, Sea, Sunset, Twilight
In a fatal blue fugue,
she bruises
the edge of an hour.
She swallows the
Evening’s clear cries
of dark-dipping gulls
flung across the sunken wound
of Sunset.
Her brash toes dissolve through
the wrinkly-white
sibilance of quiet Tide;
her cloudy dress of Pastel Sadness
dragging carelessly behind.
A summer child is Twilight,
as overhead, Night begins to swim.
And in a rasp of
Rain-stung wind
she mutters something soft
and inarticulate
as she kicks away
the last cherry shadows
of an old rusty day.
Gentle and elegiac. “a rasp of…Rain-stung wind” was palpable.
Thanks so much for the superlative comment! I am delighted it was enjoyed! Thanks so much for drizzling by and imbibing. Jubilant cheers,
Autumn Jade
Beautiful images
Thank you! The sad, coy beauty of the sea never stops enthralling and enchanting me. Smiling cheers,
Autumn Jade
The day that passes in to night Naitchers shift workers do their Thing Ken D
Thanks so much for your lovely words, dear matie!
Beautiful! 🙂
Thanks so much!! 😀
Splendid ❤ Those sad colours invaded my heart. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment that has made a tender mark upon me old briny heart. Hugs. Thank you lassie!!
Autumn Jade
Ah, such beautiful images, and I love your haunting and captivating poem, AJ.
Thanks so much Paradise!! So elated it was enjoyed. Thank you for oozing in and having a look. I trust you are having a splendid week, cheers!
Autumn Jade
Wonderful allegory and vivid imagery. Love the photos with such sharp focal range!
Thank you Sir!
Amazing beautiful photo.
Thank you so much! Cheers!
Autumn Jade
Gorgeous language….photos to match!
Thank you! I am delighted it was enjoyed. Thank you for flitting by and having a wee glance around and bequeathing such kind words. Ebullient cheers,
Autumn Jade
unique.your voice. your eye…
Greetings! Thank you. I am delighted it was enjoyed. Thank you for coming by! Best wishes to you,
Autumn Jade
Beautiful imagery and words!
Greetings! I am overjoyed that you found my bruised and briny old words and photos beautiful. That is all one ever hopes for! Thanks a grand for flitting by and bestowing such kind words! Greatly appreciated! Best wishes and cheers,
Autumn Jade
It was my pleasure! 🙂
Very good — your word reach inside.
Aloha! Thank you for the wonderful comment! Such as they felt to me. So happy you stopped by and had a wee look. Cheers,
Autumn Jade
Beautiful images and great words!
Thank you! I had a very grand time putting this one together. So happy you drizzled by! Many cheers to you,
Autumn Jade
exquisite melancholy
Thank you!
Wow! You’ve captured all the beauty so well with the beautiful poem and shots AJ. Absolutely amazing. Love it! 😀
Thanks so much Sonel! I felt this one a bit deeply. I am elated that it was enjoyed. Thank you so much for sluicing by. Cheers!
Smiling Toad
I can see that and it’s wonderful to be able to describe it so well. I truly did enjoy and you’re welcome. 😀
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Great poem and I feel the sadness of the sea.
Thank you!!